Kotemaori

Please comment of this student's work. Use the literacy progressions and the literacy standards to guide your thinking

I invite you to comment on the language features evidenced in this piece of work and where you would place him against the year 5 writing standard. ||
 * [[file:MY HOLIDAYS.doc]] || Taurion is a year 5 student who talks about a trip to the South Island to visit family. This is a piece of recount writing and was the result of a task where they were told to recount a personal experience. This is an edited final version of his story which he has done independently.